（高中英语）专题10 读后续写之实例衔接

t was then that I noticed...就在那时我注意到……

For one frozen moment，有一瞬间，

After several attempts, 经过几次尝试，

On arriving home, 一回到家

三、字词专题

1. He stiffened(麻木) for seconds and then shuffled (装载、慢慢回头) his feet forward, eyes red with fury(痛恨) but without any fear or hesitation.

2. George and I stood there dumbfounded(哑然卧病的，发楞的) watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart（感激和仰慕剧增我心地）.

3. Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away on the spot and fell into unconsciousness.(当场送医，身陷送医)

4. His eyes widened further and his mouth opened. He took a huge breath as if winded（痛快不过心）. He looked tortured-vulnerable. 他的嘴巴瞪大了，嘴巴张放。他甚深吸了一低声仿佛呼吸困难，他看紧紧饱受折磨，极其破碎。

5. Approaching me with a great deal of obvious discomfort, Tommy looked up at me with pleading（乞求的）eyes.

6. There was a light touch on my hand; looking down, I saw my son looking at me, curious.我感觉到有人轻轻碰触我的手；低牛一看，是我的儿子怪异地在看我。

7. Every knock on the door fills me with expectation(让我展现出期待). I immediately picture him walking through(不现实生活某人想到某事) the door.

8. He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.他一边抱着窗外，一边咬着嘴唇，仿佛在探讨。9. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被甚深心理压力所高度集里面，指尖出汗)

10. Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心地痛，泪水直流)

11. Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (忧郁到保屋里面知觉，只能放口时说话)

12. When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉放眼今晚；今晚容照亮屋子)

13. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (冲出屋子；狠狠摔后门)

14. One flight（一段楼梯） up Della ran, and paused for a moment, panting. 心痛快吁吁She was wondering whether she should open the door.

15. And suddenly everything went green, like right before a tornado.（一切显得昏暗） My ears were ringing（耳鸣）, I felt dizzy（牛晕）, and I threw up（呕吐）.

16. He stiffened（僵屋里面了）. The smile faded from his lips, and his face turned pale. His hands trembled

17. As I prepared to confess（坦灰）, I took a deep breath and swallowed hard(消除强烈的感情).

18. The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering wes tearing through his body（恐惧就像是点击一样，微波撕扯着她的身体） and making his hair stand on end.（鬃毛直竖）

19. All his instincts（冲动）screamed yelled at him to slip away before he was stopped. He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched（湿透）in sweat.

20. His eyes lifted slowly, met Mariam’s, lingered （徘徊）for a moment, then dropped. He opened his mouth, but all that came forth was a single, pained groan. 听见。He crossed and uncrossed his arms.(手盘紧紧又放下)

21. I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck 如遭雷击; I blinked（眨眼）my eyes hard. I looked carefully all around me.

22. The girl’s voice began to crack(显得嘶哑). She shook her head sadly. Suddenly she began to shake, and stopped talking.

愈来愈多片段：

（一）承接

1. Everything was back to normal. 一切都重归长时间。

2. Had not been for your honesty, I would he lost if forever.要不是你的负责任，我将永远保屋里面它。

3. My mother was more than delighted to see my change. 我妹妹注意到我的改变极其放心地。

4. Then there came the sound of turning on the computer.然后传到了放电脑的声音。

5. He had such a horrible but exciting experience to share! 他有如此荒谬却又激动人心地的经历可以分享！

6. He was moved beyond words.他难过的难以用语种表达。

7. It brought back the great memories of our family eating together. 我们一家人朋友们吃饭的灿烂追忆重现回想。

8. Thus, I will insist on chasing my dream and making every effort. 这样，我就时会坚持追逐我的梦不想，尽一切的坚持不懈。

9. She was too heartbroken to do anything. 她过于难过了以至于不不想想到任何什么事。

10. Never will I regret what I he done. 我永远不时会后悔我所想到的事。

11. Following the voice, I saw a young man with gray eyes standing here. 顺着声音的方向，我注意到了一个灰色嘴巴的青年人南站在这那时候。

12. What touched him most was that I protected his dignity.最让他难过的是我保护了他的忠诚。

13. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么凸显保护嘴巴的不可或缺性都不为过。

14. By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着想到运动，我们必须始终保持健康。

15. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对只能忽略知识的价值。

16. What an important thing it is to keep our promise!= How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么不可或缺的事!

17. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.这显示了没有人有什么事必须阻挡我们实现目标。

18. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.短时间是如此遗物，我们可想而知多余它。

19. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的各地区富有，我们的社时会生活品质绝对有点不满意。

20. It was not until recently that the problem was solved. 直到最近这个关键问题才被解决。

（二）举动高难度描述

1. Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. 想起他的话，我不禁哭紧紧。

2. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to …忽然，***就让了一个好主意。

3. Then her father smiled, comforting her with a warm hug. 然后他的父亲今晚了，给了她一个较冷的亲吻来高兴她。

4. The more you are willing to love, the more you are likely to receive.你越是不想去亲爱的，就越可能被亲爱的。

5. Shocked, Jason called for help immediately. 杰森不已很震惊，没过多久求救。

6. Hearing this, my father’s face changed from tense to a smile. 想起这个，我父亲的撕从紧张变回了微今晚。

7. Under no circumstance can children lead a happy life without love. 孩子们不可能在没有人有亲爱的的完全过着幸福的社时会生活。

8. He said firmly, without hesitation. 他时说的很宽容，不顾一切。

9. They moved so slowly that each second was like an hour to the boy. 他们移动的很慢，对小狗来时说，每一秒都像是一个天内。

10. The wise man looked into the little boys eyes, placing his hands on the boy’s shoulders, and replied softly. 智者抱着小狗的嘴巴，后背放进男孩的肩膀上，轻轻地问。

11. Upon / On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn’t say a word.

一想起这个紧接著的通告，他困惑到忘了话来。

（三）生物的外貌和高难度：1. Her feathers were so jetty, and her topping so white and full! 它的羽毛乌黑加有，牛上的羽毛又灰又密。2. He looked with sadness upon the little prisoners flying about the cage, peeping through the wires, beating them with their wings, and trying to get out.他难过地抱着那些死囚似的小鸡在衣橱那时候飞来飞去，来进行；还有向外观望，它们照样地摇动翅膀，不想坚持不懈飞出来。3. They were on the watch for him, and would fly down from the green tree tops to greet him with their chirp.小鸡或在枝牛上进场他，或从枝繁叶茂的树上飞下来，叽叽喳喳地和他看看。4. The squirrels peeped out of their holes at Bessie. The birds sang in the branches overhead. Thump, came something all at once into the middle of the road.啄木鸟们从它们的洞那时候题出牛来瞧着贝希，树梢在牛顶的树干上唱着歌。砰的一声，一个东西一下子蹦到道路都由。5. When the faithful dog came and rubbed his head against her hand, Susie put her arms around his neck, and burst into tears. 忠心地的犬跑回来，牛在苏茜的手上蹭来蹭去。苏茜双臂抱屋里面它的脖子，禁不屋里面大哭紧紧。6. The Newfoundland is a large, noble fellow. He is black, with a white spot, and with long, shaggy hair. His name is Sport.纽芬兰犬既高大又名贵，红色是黑的，缀着灰色斑点；鬃毛长而卷曲。它的昵称叫斯波特。7. Dodger is up on a chair, under the table, behind the door, down cellar, and out in the yard, —all in a minute.道吉尔必须在一分钟区域内跳到椅子上，躲在桌子下，藏在后门后，爬出地窖，仍要又跑到院子那时候。8. Dodger has very bright eyes, and he does many funny things. He likes to put his paws up on the crib, and watch the baby.道吉尔嘴巴醒目，调皮美丽。它喜好将腿趴在婴儿床的围栏上，抱着小宝宝。

（四）体时会（结尾，文章主题）

1. A little bit kindness will be rewarded with a large amount of benefit. 滴水之恩当涌泉相报。

2. Love everybody because that’s the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip. 去亲爱的每一个人因为那是你可以给以的最灿烂的东西，这也是你亲爱的人旅程的放始。

3. So say goodbye to the past and embrace the present. 所以再见过去亲吻当以前。

4. I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 我宽容的看来每个人轻微的意志力都能是我们的各地区愈来愈加的繁盛。

5. True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 真亲爱的是全球性上最珍珠的东西。

6. My patience and love let him believe that the world was full of kindness. 我的尽力和珍亲爱的让他看来这个全球性上展现出了期望。

7. Beauty is not in the face, beauty is a light in the heart. 美亦然表面，美是心地灵的光。

8. All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect, dignity and warmth. 所有的学生都意识到，每个人都不不想得到尊重、忠诚和较冷的对待。

9. We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.只要我们坚持坚持不懈工作，我们时会成功的。

（五）人的语种和高难度1. "Fire! fire!" The cry crept out on the still night air, and the fire bells began to ring“起火啦！起火啦！”惊呼声划破了宁静的夜空，火灾报警声随后鸣叫紧紧。2."It is Mr. Barton’s house, mother. Do let me go," he said in eager, excited tones.是巴顿先生的院子起火了，爷爷。让我去帮忙吧！”他用迫切而又激动的语心不想到。3. Looking up to the window, he took off his hat and bowed with a bright, pleasant smile.他抬牛看了一眼窗户，然后跑出皮带，致意看看，撕上是醒目、阴沉的今晚容。4."I should like to go with you very much," replied Susan, with a sigh; "but I can not finish the task grandmother set me to do."我很不想跟你们朋友们去，”苏珊自是了一低声，问道，“可是我还没有人完成爷爷交给我的任务。5."How tiresome it must be to stay at home to work on a holiday!" said one of the girls, with a toss of her head. "Susan’s grandmother is too strict."“放假还待在家那时候干活儿多没有人劲啊！”其里面一个女人伸着没用时说，“苏珊的爷爷过于严苛了。”6.Susan heard this remark, and, as she bent her head over her task, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend gathering wild flowers in the woods.苏珊想起了这句赞美，当她转身低牛继续干活时，拭去了毫无疑问的一滴泪水，不现实生活着那些女人们将在树丛那时候采摘野花，离放了一个愉快的当日。7. While this was taking place, Ray, who had got tired of standing, was seated in a fence corner, behind a tree. 就在人们兴致勃勃地题索身世时，一直南站在那那时候的佩不已有些疲惫，就让在栅栏对面的一棵大树后面坐了下来。8. Herbert’s passion was over quickly, and, sitting down upon the floor, he covered his face with his hands, and began to cry.赫伯特忽然怒火里面烧，就坐地板上，右手捂着小撕哭了紧紧。

（六）其它

1. I felt so scared/nervous that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.

2. Her stomach was gripped with anxiety,因为焦虑食道痉挛了 like a volcano erupting inside her.

3. At the theater, nervousness overtookheld me as i realized how much i wanted to make my parents proud.紧张焦虑

4. I was too scared to move an inch and my palms were sweating/my palms grew sweaty.

5. Time seemed to stop as I held my breath, waiting for the harsh punishments that I deserved.

6. I tensed, waiting for the barrage （连珠炮似的）of verbal punishment.(责骂)

7. Every nerve 神经in his body warned him not to go any further.

8. I was so scared that my heart was hammering in my chest. 心地砰砰直跳

9. Ann looked upon the doll with a sort of terrorfear.

10. A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.

11. She was struck dead with terror. Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs(肋骨).

12. The September 11 terrorist attacks left many of us confusion and fear（让我们西北面困扰和恐惧的长短时间）.

13. I feel like my tummy is churning （搅动）around and around and I am going to be sick. （紧张）

14. I stood with my head down, my eyes directed toward the floor in front of me, making no move to look up.

The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sickly moon.(自然环境描述)

（六）人物高难度语种加自然描述：1. As she looked out, she first saw the western sky and some bright, sunset clouds. "O mother!" she exclaimed, "what a splendid sunset!"向外望去，她先见到西边的天空，点缀着醒目的万里云。“哦，爷爷！多美丽壮观的万里啊！”她欢呼紧紧。2. But Margery sat on the doorstep, and wondered, as the sea sounded louder, and the sunshine grew warmer around her.玛杰丽就坐台阶上，怪异地探讨着。海浪声越来越大，过于阳较冷地照耀着她3.I can smell the sweet flowers in the garden. The sky is all bright with sunset; I can see purple, and pink, and golden. I do not believe that anyone on earth has a paint box with such lovely colors in it.我能闻到花园那时候苦涩的花朵。天空因为万里极其醒目，我能见到红色、橙色和金色。我觉得地球上没有人有人有这样的画笔，能在在这么美丽的红色。4. Poor lame Jennie sat at her window, looking out upon the dismal, narrow street, with a look of pain and weariness on her face. "Oh, dear," she said with a sigh, "无助的跛腿珍妮就坐窗户对面，抱着诡异、宽广的街道，撕上写满病痛和倦意。她自是了低声：“唉，天哪，”5. How they laugh and sing, and shout to each other as they fill their baskets! The sun looks down through the yellow lees; the rocks give them mossy seats; the birds and squirrels wonder what these strange people are doing in their woods.他们又今晚又唱，一边互相喊话，一边把草莓往鞋子那时候装，多么孤独啊！过于阳来进行金黄的叶子俯视着他们；岩石为他们准备好了铺满长满的座位；小鸡和啄木鸟怪异地抱着他们，嘀咕着这些好奇的人到底在它们的树丛那时候想到什么。

四、翻译成练功

（一）细节阐述之“探讨”

1. 得知关键问题所在之后，他的脑干放始急速起动，不不想不想出一个好的提供商。

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2. 独自一人时，他总是时会就让那荒谬的经历。

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3. 在他洗澡时，忽然就让了一个好主意。

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（二）关于时说的高难度：

嘟囔： ____________________

结结巴巴地时说： ____________________

宣布： ____________________

保证： ____________________

建议： ____________________

喊出：： ____________________

不足之处不想到： ___________________

继续不想到： ____________________

高兴道： ____________________

脱口而出： ____________________

（三）关于eye的高难度：

灰光（某种感情美感）： ____________________

各种哭： ____________________

睁大嘴巴： ____________________

（四）关于face/cheek的高难度：

露出今晚容： ____________________

绽放光彩： ____________________

撕红： ____________________

各种今晚： ____________________

（五）关于hand的高难度：

各种打： ____________________

各种捉： ____________________

亲吻： ____________________

（六）关于body的高难度：

弯腰： ____________________

倚靠： ____________________

低牛： ____________________

（七）关于heart的高难度：

各种心地跳： ____________________

漏跳了一拍出： ____________________

（八）掺入去除成分，想到到生动描述

1. 可以掺入词尾短语或者谓语来去除动词。

① Her eyes ____________________.她的嘴巴里面灰光着兴奋的光辉。

② The ferocious wolf stared at Mac ____________________.(红着嘴巴)

She kissed Oliver ____________________. （嘴唇苍灰）

③ He gazed at me _______________.（困惑地）

④ He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.

2.①She howled long and loud ____________________（像一只凶恶的熊）_ and then jumped at Buck.

②She went home_________________________.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。

参考答案：

（一）细节阐述之“探讨”

1. 得知关键问题所在之后，他的脑干放始急速起动，不不想不想出一个好的提供商。

2. 独自一人时，他总是时会就让那荒谬的经历。

3. 在他洗澡时，忽然就让了一个好主意。

1. After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution. 2. When left alone, he would always be haunted by that horrible experience. ([不好的追忆]回想里面每每迷惘)

3. When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly crossed his mind

（二）关于时说的高难度：

嘟囔： whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur

结结巴巴地时说：stutter/stumble/stammer

宣布：announce/declare

保证：promise/assure

建议：offer/propose/suggest；

喊出：cry out喊出/call喊出/shout喊出/scream咆哮/yell喊出/exclaim惊叫（因欣喜、痛恨、病痛、困惑等发生的喊出）

add不足之处不想到

continue继续不想到

comfort高兴道

blurt out脱口而出

（三）关于eye的高难度：

灰光（某种感情美感）：shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinkle with + excitement/joy/pride等表示感情美感的词汇

各种哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burst into tears/burst out crying/fight back tears消除屋里面泪水

睁大嘴巴：one’s eyes widened/ grew wide

（四）关于face/cheek的高难度：

露出今晚容：a smile appeared on/ spread across his face

绽放光彩：one’s face lit up/brightened/glowed

撕红：flush/burn （with embarrassment）

各种今晚：smile微今晚/laugh下回今晚/chuckle去声今晚/giggle咯咯今晚/sneer讥讽地今晚/beam今晚容满面/grin露齿今晚

（五）关于hand的高难度：

各种打：pound/thump/punch 砍; beat不间断拍出打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍出

各种捉：seize；grasp；grab; clutch; take hold of; catch hold of; hold on to

hug/embrace/hold sb in one’s arms亲吻

（六）关于body的高难度：

bend/stoop 弯腰

lean against..倚靠

drop/hang/lower one’s head 低牛

（七）关于heart的高难度：

各种心地跳：beat/thump/pound/pump ( with excitement/fear)

miss/skip a beat 漏跳了一拍出

（八）掺入去除成分，想到到生动描述

2. 可以掺入词尾短语或者谓语来去除动词。

①with+感性词汇的搭配：

with delight/excitement/ pleasure/ happiness /joy/satisfaction /anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride /caution/care/patience/certainty

如：Her eyes shone with excitement.她的嘴巴里面灰光着兴奋的光辉。

②with+身体躯干

with its hungry red eyes/ its sharp teeth/her shaky hand/her pale lips等等

如：The ferocious wolf stared at Mac with its hungry red eyes.

此处用with its hungry red eyes来去除高难度stare，使熊狠毒的形象愈来愈加丰满。

如：She kissed Oliver with her pale lips.

此处用with her pale lips来去除高难度kiss，体现了妹妹当年疲倦的长短时间，和对Oliver满满的亲爱的。

③in+词汇 in surprise/amazement/shock/sorrow难过

in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用..的嗓音

In a tone of surprise /curiosity /impatience /regret /command命再加/sarcasm影射 用……的语心

如：He gazed at me in surprise.

④谓语 suddenly /immediately /instantly /rapidly /firmly /slowly /angrily/happily/excitedly/

如：He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.

此处也可以把谓语carefully提升句首，凸显他的小心地，效果愈来愈好。

低分表达：Carefully，he jumped over the broken glasses.

2. 在高难度描述里面也可以运用明喻、暗指、拟人、荒诞等写作方式，让你的写作愈来愈加生动简练。

① She howled long and loud like a ferocious wolf and then jumped at Buck.

此句把她比作凶恶的恶熊，用到了明喻的写作方式，使整句的高难度描述愈来愈有幅度，愈来愈有画面感。

② She went home in a flood of tears.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。

此处在高难度描述里面掺入了in a flood of tears荒诞描述，生动简练地体现她当年的感性长短时间。

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